Initial Story Boards

Together my brother and I have been putting together a rough story board for our film currently titled 'Opening Night'.
Here are some sample panels from our initial story boards.

Together we pitched our idea to our tutors and other people on our course in a 'sweatbox' session.
Thankfully the overall response was positive, However it has become clear the ending needs more work in order to give the audience a more satisfying conclusion between the Mail man and Actress characters. A title scene and a few opening shots also need to be added. From here we will produce a rough animatic by loading the panels into premiere to edit a rough version of our film with timings and temp sound effects.